Author: Gigi Lynn (Page 2 of 9)

Write to Mission

Love Is the Key: Writing and Reading Romance

I’m intrigued by this phrase: Write to Mission. What does it mean? For you as a reader, for me as an author of romances?

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A phrase I hear more often is: Write to Market. This means try to find what is trending/what is selling and write that kind of story.

But I really prefer the first.

But what exactly does it mean? When I invite you into the world I’ve created, what journey do I want you to embark on ? What experiences will you have with my characters?

And I have to ask about the journey I want to go on as well. Where should writing/creating take me?

Part of the meaning of the phrase, write to mission, has to be building my world (my day to day world, my author world, and my fictional worlds) grounded in my values.

So, here I’ll try to list a few of those values.

I believe that love is the key–to everything good. Love is the answer, not only in a good story, but in life.

It’s easy to recognize love in the sweet, joyful times. Those moments of deep and meaningful connection and sharing are exhilarating and exquisite.

But love is also the answer in the middle of difficulties and disagreements. It requires respect, sacrifice, forgiveness, and compromise, but it’s worth it. Because love solves problems. Or, when a problems can’t be solved (and some challenges are long term), love helps us to understand and bear the load. And share the load. It gives us the strength to go on.

And I’m speaking here about both love for ourselves as well as love for others. Honesty and trust, courage, commitment, loyalty, fidelity, serving, nurturing and caring. All are part of love. I believe in these. I hope for these things.

At home and in the world, love conquers all.

These beliefs are the foundation of my life and writing, and the foundation of my stories.

I think you must share my belief in love and my hope that love will win in the end.

I bet you have stories of what love has done or allowed you to do in your life. I’d love to hear your stories of love, in the good times and the bad.

Romance–But Trying Something New

A Palette Cleanser, or a New Addition to Gigi Lynn Writes?

I love writing historical romance!

Rebel Hearts Book 1

I love the characters. I love the research. I love that “love conquers all” theme.

Free Rebel Hearts Prequel Novella

I think I will always write historical romance.

And Book 2 of the Rebel Hearts Series is sceduled for the first week in July. The writing on Book 3 of the Rebel Hearts Series is going well.

But I had an idea a week ago that planted itself in my mind and won’t let go, so in my spare time, I’ve been working on it.

It’s still a sweet, closed-door romance. It just happens to be set in a fantasy world. It’s set on an island nation of shape changers–Sirens, with power in their voices.

Would you like a sneak peek of my first draft of Chapter 1?

Here it is. I hope you enjoy it.

Working title: Charmed

Thick, dark clouds gathered on the horizon as we prepared for the coming battle. This time the enemy were Jemarri, skilled in combat and archery. They claimed to be descended from the Gods millennia ago. It might have been true.

This Jamar force sailed toward us in five triremes, each big enough to seat 170 oarsmen in three rows. Our scouting party had spied them out and found that each ship was armed with four ballistae modified for harpoons, two on the port, two on the starboard side. I gripped my spear in my right hand and kept my primary knife in my left and watched their large square sails moved inexorably closer.

Zephyrois approached me and took my chin in his big hand. “Raidne, I need you to stay in the shoals. Take the watch.”

I shook my head. “No Zeph. I may be the youngest daughter of the house of Nereidos, but the queen’s blood runs through my veins. I can help. I can fight.”

“Of course you can. I trained you myself, didn’t I? But I’m depending on you. You’ll be the last defense. You’re the protector of the inner villages and the stormquartz fields. And Raidne,” he tugged the braid that hung over my shoulder, “you are to protect yourself. You are our heart.” Zeph leaned forward and kissed me on the forehead.

“Alkaios,” he said to our brother, “watch over her.”

Kai didn’t argue.

I glared at Zeph’s back. “Of course, you can fight, Raidne.” I muttered as he strode to the front of our gathered forces. “But I’ll leave a guard for you, so you won’t hurt your helpless self.” I turned to Kai. “Does he realize how his last words undermine everything he said before?”

“If it’s any comfort to you, he doesn’t want me at the battlefront either.”

“Zeph is only three years older than I. Only two years older than you. We have trained and—”

I stopped talking as the queen, our mother walked up to the highpoint of the Isona Promontory. Wrapped in a white robe, trimmed in gold threads and fastened at her shoulder with a large gold clip worked in the insignia of our house, she looked over her assembled soldiers. Her long blonde hair lifted and fluttered in the freshening breeze.

As the sun sank below the horizon, she raised her arms to the sky. Her whole being seemed to spark in the dying light.

Only then did she release her powerful, hypnotic voice, “Once again we are called to defend our homeland and our way of life. Again, an enemy from beyond the sea thinks to roam our seas unsanctioned, to steal our precious resources, our stormquartz, to limit our power, or destroy us if they can.

“They think they know the bounds of our strength, so they have stopped their ears.” Her mocking laughter rang through the surrounding bluffs and eddied through the assembled army. “But this night we will show them that the Syrenii will not bow to any being, above or below the seas.”

Her chaunt began as a low, mournful melody, quickly building in volume and power, increasing in tempo until she was belting a militant but lyrical battle cry. At the crescendo, she unclipped the badge at her shoulder. The white ethereal robe fluttered to the ground to reveal gold scales already spreading down from her hips to encircle and fuse her legs. Before her transformation was complete, she thrust herself from the precipice, her tail fin forming while she descended to the deep blue sea below.

In ranks, we followed our queen, leaving behind a pile of silk and linen robes, wraps, and sarongs to litter the mountain.

At last, Kai and I dove into the sea, but instead of following the advancing army, we swam around the beachhead to the pools protected by the ring of jutting rocks that poked out of the tide like sharpened teeth and nearly surroundedSyreniia, our island home.

 Kai took his thumb and smoothed the line between my brows. “This enemy knows our greatest power. They have armed themselves against the siren’s song. The women will be no more powerful than the men in this battle.”

“And yet, I am the only daughter of the queen that isn’t fighting.”

“I understand. Other than Xanthos, who is still with his wet-nurse, I am the only son who is not fighting.”

“Why doesn’t it bother you more?”

He opened his mouth to speak, but a thud and creak of tearing wood broke the night air. Our force had breached the first ship.

I submerged and swam from behind the rock formations so I could see. The waves on the surface frothed with the coming storm, below the water swirled back and forth. Sediment from the sea floor stirred in the swelling water.

Still, I saw the two huge harpoons, those made to hunt whales, break the surface, slanting down through the water. One pierced the shoulder of the leading soldier. The attached rope tautened, and she was pulled toward the surface.

Without thought I started swimming toward her. Kai followed.

With the knife in her left hand, the syrenii sawed at the rope. Moments before she reached the surface, the last strand broke. She paused only a moment before she dove down with the harpoon still jutting from her shoulder. She didn’t stop. She stabbed her steel- tipped spear into the hull next to the hole she had already made. She twisted the spear and pulled at the breach, even as the water darkened with her blood. The hole widened.

Once again, the harpoons speared through the water. Her long dark hair obscured her face, but I recognized my eldest sister, Leucosia. She would be killed if those thick, barbed spears kept coming.

I swam faster than I ever had before into the deeper water, heading toward the ship’s bow, with Kai close on my tail. Clouds of silt obscured my sight of the distant syrenii. Every breath felt as if it came through a filter of sand. When I neared the surface, I slowed and raised only the top of my head above water. I searched the deck of the ship. It took only moments to find the two archers.

Dropping my head below the water, I pushed my words into Kai’s mind. He nodded and swam behind and below me. When we neared the bow of the boat, I took a kneeling position very near the water line, facing the enemy. When I lifted my hand, Kai charged up toward me with powerful strokes, bending and snapping his fin like a whip and building up speed.

With a surge, he half-pushed, half-threw me up into the air. At the apex of my flight, I pulled my right arm back and hurled my spear at the closest harpooner.

Before the sailors could react, I dived back into the sea.

Kai handed me his spear, and sunk below me, so that he could throw me again. Again, my spear flew true, and the second harpooner fell to my bolt.

Kai and I rounded the starboard side of the ship and raced to Cosia. Though her shoulder still bled into the water around her, she resisted until Kai pried the spear from her hands. “I will finish this,” he pushed the thought. “Go with Raidne.”

She considered for another few moments before she inclined her head and joined me. We moved at an angle to avoid the notice of the Jemarri sailors. Cosia swam awkwardly with the harpoon still buried in her shoulder. I slowed to keep pace with her.

By the time we were half a league from the shallow pool in the lea of the rock where Zeph had told us to wait, she was so weakened that I had to carry her. Breathless, I finally settled her in a tide pool deep enough to cover her body and propped her head above the water.

Cosia was pale, but she tried a smile. “Did you just pierce their throwing arms? I know you don’t like to kill.”

I examined the wound. “It was necessary this time. They would have kept shooting until they captured you.”

“Thank you.”

I met her eyes. “The barbs will shred your shoulder if I pull the harpoon out. Do you want to wait for Geia?

“No. You do it. I can’t wait.”

I nodded and put my back against the rock. Cosia submerged herself fully in the water and nodded to me. I gripped the end of the staff closest to the long whale bone head of the harpoon. I drew in one deep breath, and on the exhale, I pulled with all my might. Cosia’s scream spread in ripples through the water, and she passed out.

“No!” I cried. Throwing the harpoon toward the shore, I rolled forward to pull her into my arms. I kept her damaged shoulder in the healing salt water and put my ear to her heart. When I heard the deep thrum, rapid but steady, tears filled my eyes, slid across the bridge of my nose, and dripped onto her chest.

Sitting hip deep in the water and holdingCosia, I watched the rest of the battle. I could only see the men on the ships, fearlessly fighting a fast moving, at times nearly invisible foe. It took two more hours before the last ship sunk beneath the waves.

“It is finished. Everyone will return soon.” Even as I said the words, I knew it was impossible that all would return, but surely all my sisters and brothers.

Cosia was conscious though still pale. She kept her right shoulder in the water and started stretching it gently, working to prevent the loss of her range of motion and strength. “It should never have happened. I must make mother see that her determination to hold onto the old ways won’t work anymore. We must change if we want to survive.”

Humor in Romance

We fall in love, and everything is wonderful. But let’s be honest, the world intrudes. Sometimes things get hard. But we still have that hope that love can endure?

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Or as Shakespeare wrote:

. . . Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O no, it is an ever-fixed mark That looks on tempests and is never shaken.

That’s the dream in real life. Even if we don’t get that dream, or get to keep that dream, that’s the ideal, the wish, the hope. And that’s what we want in our romance books, isn’t it? A love we can believe will endure.

In a chest of tools that might build that kind of lasting love, the ability to laugh has to be included. Humor allows us to live with the little idiosyncrasies in our partner. It allows us to weather those tempests of life. It builds common experiences and a common language.

On top of all that, it is healthy to laugh. I won’t list the research, but we must laugh more.

Believing this, I try to include some humorous situations or dialogue in each of my novels and novellas. While I’m writing those parts, I am chuckling, or smirking, or laughing out loud. But humor is such a subjective thing. Every time I write something I think is funny, I ask myself: But will that reader laugh?

So, I’d love to hear what you think is funny. When was the last time you just guffawed, in real life or in response to a book, movie, or show? What situations in your life make you roll your eyes and chuckle? What ironies make you shake your head with a helpless titter? What did someone say that surprised a laugh out of you?

I’d love you to share. You never know, you may find a similar situation, conversation, or experience in one of my romance novels in the future.

Dear Lord Wycliffe: An Epistolary Novel Sneak Peek

From: Lady Corinna Capener — 32 Portman Square — London

To: Lady Georgiana Seymour — Farindel Hall — Sandgate, Kent

November 1, 1792

My dearest friend,

The days of adventure are over. Romance is dead. We were not waylaid by a highwayman on our way to London.

Instead, my brother arranged everything so that we traveled by easy stages and stopped each night at inns along the way. I wish I could have traveled to town as Rupert did, on the back of a horse. Instead, Jaminna and I rode in the carriage and took turns trying to entertain little Henry. Six-year-old boys should never be closed up in a carriage for three days on end. Neither should twenty-year-old ladies.

You know I cannot read while traveling in a carriage without becoming quite ill, so I watched out the window and tried to think of games and stories engaging enough to while away the time. Lacking imagination, I borrowed some of yours.

But Georgie, there is one particularly lonely, atmospheric stretch of road between Highgate and Islington that sparked my imagination. I will try to capture the flight of fancy it inspired and the story I told Minna and Henry.

‘Millions of stars shimmer above us. A low mist eddies over the road. I, the stupendously beautiful and spoiled Lady Corinna Anne Capener, wealthy beyond words, (it is my story after all), am making my way to take London by storm.

‘But what is this? Just as the full moon rises over the trees on the eastern horizon, a daring thief rides out of the woods, shoots into the air, and bellows, “Stand and deliver.”

‘The carriage pulls to a shuddering stop. The horses buck and blow, mist rising from their backs. The carriage door opens, and a tall, dark man looms over us. His face is lean and chiseled—No wait, the lower portion of his face is hidden by a mask, and his eyes gleam from beneath the shadow of his hat.

‘I lift my chin and climb down into the terrifying night, bravely shielding my fellow travelers. Just like in the accounts of Claude Duval, that famous 17th century knight of the road, my gentleman highwayman bows over my hand and agrees to accept less plunder if I dance with him on the moonlit roadside.’

I admit I felt quite proud of this gripping beginning to my story. Both Henry and Minna were enthralled. Then Rupert rode up beside us to ask after our comfort. He reminded me of more prosaic probabilities, and I laughed. Even if we were stopped by a thief who was dressed in the latest fashion and acted in the most gentlemanly manner, you know my brother would not like to be relieved of fifty guineas and tied to a tree.

And with my luck our highwayman wouldn’t be a nobleman in disguise, forced by his evil, usurping uncle to make his living on the high toby, but only a garden variety crook, determined to take my pearl ring and necklace and the few pence I had in my reticule.

Worse, it is much more likely I would stare mutely, like a dullard, rather than banter and jest with my creation. I hate to disappoint you, but I am not made for adventure, except as it happens in books.

Despite the uncomfortable monotony (and lack of romantic highwaymen), we arrived in London yesterday and settled into Capener Court. Minna says she is eager to take me shopping to update my wardrobe for the coming season. Can you believe it? She is the most generous soul and exceedingly kind to me when any other lady would resent having to chaperon her husband’s younger sister for a second year.

Really, I don’t know how Rupert convinced her to marry him. Not that he isn’t a good brother, but you know how stuffy and conventional he can be. And we won’t even mention how miserly, not that Minna regards that for one moment. She seems to find it an amusing challenge.

I thank you for the note you slipped into my reticule. It was a delightful interlude on the long journey, although I am not concerned that you will languish as you predict in your note. Before the month is out you will find something to entertain you, even in Folkestone. Exciting things always happen around you. To illustrate, I remind you of the infamous ‘mystery of the purloined handkerchief,’ and the questions surrounding ‘who put the toad in the Vicar’s soup bowl?’

I so wish you could have come with me to town this season as we planned. It is a tragedy that your uncle chose this precise time to ride into a fence at Chester Racecourse and die. I am truly sorry for your family’s loss, but you never knew him, so even three months of mourning seems too long to me.

I just read the last and realize how heartless I sound, but I am feeling selfish. If you were here, the season would be bearable. Instead, I am doomed to endure another string of parties and balls where I must pretend interest in men who have no interest in me beyond my portion, and whose conversation is limited to the weather, their horses and carriages, and the hunt. They would never discuss any interesting topics, with a ‘delicate lady.’

On that topic, I ask you, why is a woman who is as tall as many of the men she stands up with considered delicate? That question is impossible to answer, so I will admit to the more selfish reason I wish you were here. Dearest Georgie, I don’t know how I am to continue my correspondence with Lord Wycliffe if you are not here to smuggle my letters out to the post.

I have thought to beg one of the servants to help me, but they are loyal to Rupert and Minna. No sooner than I reveal my need to one of the maids, I fear she will expose me. I don’t like to think of what my brother will do if he ever discovers that I’ve been exchanging letters with an unrelated, unmarried gentleman, even if it is under the guise of his name.

It must end, I know. I only await Lord Wycliffe’s response to the abstract of my article on Maria Theresa, and then I will stop writing to him. I have already tempted fate far longer than is safe.

Pray for me. Or, upon second thought, don’t pray for me. The last time you prayed to be released from attending Lady Marianne’s birthday celebration, we had pouring rain for weeks.

My dearest friend, Minna is at my door. We are to go to Bond Street this morning to replace my torn pelisse. I hope my letter finds you well, and that you’ll write soon and report all the news. I know you well enough to believe you will have at least one exciting tale.

Ever your affectionate friend,

Corinna

P.S. I have tried to follow your request to give every detail and write as if I’m telling a story so you can imagine you are here with me. Please do the same. I miss you terribly already.

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From: Lady Georgiana Seymour — Farindel Hall — Sadgate, Kent

To: Lady Corinna Capener –32 Portman Square — London

November 5, 1792

Dear Corinna,

You were right as you so often are. Exciting things happen, even on the Kentish coast, when you watch for them. For your entertainment, I will now share the account of Lady Georgiana Jane Seymour and the Haunted Keep.

Yes, I’m talking about Remington Keep. I have always loved that old, rambling medieval fort with its crenelated curtain wall and round towers. Under many false names, it figures in most of the stories that I write in my secret journal.

I am pleased to report that I have now been inside those cloistered halls. You are shocked, I’m sure.

Not only did I finally get to explore the keep, but I got permission to bring the children from the Folkestone-Sandgate-Hythe Blue Coat Charity School to forage next week around the pond and in the woodlands on the west of the estate.

When I rode past the keep recently, I saw walnuts, crab apples, and elder tree berries. The he hedges were full of red currant and bramble berries. The pond is bound to have watercress and water pepper in abundance.

But I must tell you how this miracle came to be.

Mama was ill again yesterday, so I attended the charity school board meeting at The Church of St. Martins in her stead. After the meeting, I waited in the church yard for my groom to bring the cart around, and what should I happen to see but Lord Remington’s old bulky carriage, loaded down with baggage and rumbling down Horn Street? When it passed, I could see the old baron, himself, riding in sullen, stately splendor.

It came to me in a flash of inspiration. This was my chance. The baron would never invite me into his home, but with him gone, I might be able to trick my way in. All I had to do was think of a reason why we needed to meet with John Caney, the baron’s steward.

I turned right around and convinced Miss Marjorie Hoskins, the primary school teacher, to go for a ride with me. (You will see why in a few moments).

I listened to all her objections while we rode up the hill. By the time I pulled up to the front steps of the keep, I had almost convinced Marjorie that we should try to get this treat for the children. She is devoted to her charges, so I prevailed, but only because I assured her that Lord Remington was away from home.

Our knock was answered by a sour-faced butler, almost as gloomy a character as the baron himself.

“We’re here for our appointment with Mr. Caney,” I announced.

He looked at me so disbelievingly, I am sure he guessed the truth, but I lifted my chin and looked down my nose at him. Then I took Marjorie’s arm and stepped forward. To my relief the butler backed up before I ran into his black clad chest.

“Please tell Mr. Caney that Lady Georgiana Seymour and Miss Marjorie Hoskins have arrived. We’ll wait for him in the drawing room.” I handed him my card.

Cora, it worked! He narrowed his eyes at me, but he took the card, bowed, and led us to the drawing room.

Marjorie sat, but you know I cannot be still when I am nervous. I wandered around examining the stonework of the fireplace and the carved moldings.

Just when Marjorie was about to retreat, Mr. Caney came. His hair was wet and newly brushed. His cravat crisply tied.

Marjorie popped up like a cork float and turned red. My suspicions were confirmed. I thought I’d seen some warmer feelings growing between them over the last few weeks. (They are far more entertaining to watch than the vicar).

It wasn’t long before Marjorie and Mr. Caney were talking as if I wasn’t there. In fact, it was Marjorie who broached the question of foraging on the grounds. While they planned, I slipped out to explore, watching ever so carefully so the butler wouldn’t catch me.

You would not believe the state of that lovely old keep. Every upholstered piece of furniture is faded and frayed. The carpets are worn through in places, and the trim work is grimed by smoke and dirt. I know Sir Alfred let most of his staff go, but it looks like those who are left don’t even try anymore.

Worse, the air smells musty, like no one has opened a window since before we were born. The walls echo with loneliness. How could you own this glorious home and not care for it? It broke my heart to see it this way.

The old skinflint doesn’t give a mite to help support local charities and barely patronizes the village shops. What does he do with all his money?

I wandered those haunted hallways and remembered every bit of gossip I’ve ever heard since I can remember.

Old Miss Barrows says that before Lord Alfred Remington inherited, some twenty-five years ago, he fell in love and married an aristocratic French girl he met while he was visiting Ireland. They had a child, but for all I’ve heard, no one remembers whether it was a son or daughter.

Some say his parents threatened to disown him, and Sir Alfred threw his wife out. Some say the young French baroness hated his family and ran away from him. She went to America, or Ireland, or back to the continent, depending on who is telling the story.

Everyone agrees that after she was gone, the baron locked himself up in his tower in rage and sorrow.

But Cora, what if it wasn’t sorrow at all? What if it was guilt at murdering her and her child in a moment of rage? I’m sure I heard the crying of the baron’s heartbroken wife echoing through the dark, deserted halls. Maybe a baby too. He probably dumped the bodies in the moat.

Do not point out that the keep doesn’t have a mote. I’m developing a story here.

My story and my exploration were cut short when I heard footsteps coming toward me. I ran as silently as I could and slipped back into the drawing room.

By then John and Marjorie were seated side by side, and he had given her permission to bring the children, not only next week but the week following as well.

I am pleased for our school children, but even more, I am determined to investigate further and learn more of the details of ‘the case of the haunted keep.’ I’ll keep you apprised.

Now before I close, my dear Corinna, do not think that I haven’t given any thought to your difficulties. As I see it, you have two options. The first is the most boring course of action. I wish you will ignore it, but you might just take your letters to the post yourself. You’d have to create a story to explain your sudden fascination with the mail, but I have faith in your ingenuity.

My second idea of how to get your letters into your brother’s outgoing post is better. All you need is to offer your brother his favorite drink and accidentally spill some of it. While he is distracted, you can slip your letter into his correspondence. He will never know.

Of course, this won’t work more than a few times. Soon he will refuse your every offer of refreshment, but it will give you time to watch the servants and try to discern which might be willing to help you.

Yours in every adventure,

Georgie

P.S. The latest response from your gentleman acquaintance in Paris arrived on the same day I received your letter. Mother was ill again, and I almost missed the post. I only had time to write your new direction on his letter and send it with mine. I sincerely hope by the time it arrives you have found a way to receive his letters without your brother’s knowledge.

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From: Lord Daniel Wycliffe –35 Rue du Faubourge St. Honoré –Paris, France

To: Lord Rupert Capener (Intercepted by Corinna) –Rosecrest Manor –Sandgate, Kent

November 2, 1792

Dear Lord Capener,

You may not receive this letter before you remove to London, butI do not want to delay. I understand your determination to complete your work in a timely manner.

I read the abstract of your biography with interest. Your writing is clear and concise, your point of view unique and thought-provoking. I was intrigued by your choice of topic. While Maria Theresa is indeed a fascinating historical figure, she is seldom recognized for her capable governance. She made important, sweeping reforms through all the Hapsburg dominions over which she reigned, Suo jure.

I have one suggestion for you to consider. If you added more political and social context in your work, her life and reign would take on added interest and show the significance of all that she achieved.

In her father’s time, the War of Polish succession and the Russo-Turkish war weakened the state Maria Theresa inherited. Then immediately, when she came to the throne, she faced the war of Austrian succession.

I reference below some articles that you might find helpful should you decide on further research. Some of these works are difficult to find, so I have taken the liberty of submitting your name for membership to the London Republic of Letters.

You might also consider a subscription to the Gentleman’s Magazine. That periodical regularly publishes scholarly works, not only about history and politics, but also of the arts of various eras.

I find expanding my research enriches my feel for the culture and philosophies of my chosen subjects. You may find the same.

You ask about the situation in France. The news is not good. Every day that the Jacobins grow in power, conditions deteriorate. The food riots in January, France’s declaration of war with Austria, Hungary, and Bohemia in April, and the two invasions of the Tuileries over the summer with their attendant massacres were brutal in the extreme.

Now they have arrested King Louis XVI and abolished the monarchy, establishing themselves a Republic. After months of debate, the National Convention is recognized as the governing body, but the people’s rage does not diminish.

Even the old forms of address are banned, and everyone is now titled citoyen or citoyenne.

As a fellow student of politics and history, I know you will mourn as I do that not only are the revolutionaries determined to build a new future, but they are also trying to destroy any record of the past.

This is not so prevalent in the north since the National Archives were established two years ago. But in the south, mobs break into church property where priceless historical documents have been stored for centuries. They throw the priests out, take their scrolls—some medieval in date—to the town squares and build bonfires. All the while, the people cheer.

Then the monasteries, cathedrals, and parish churches are used as stables. French farm animals live surrounded by ruined centuries-old frescoes.

As the common people take over castles and palaces, they confiscate any record of the feudalism that bred the current political and social systems—medieval deeds, charters, genealogies, and titles. Every time I witness the destruction, I can barely contain my outrage. Not only do they seek to dispossess the nobility, but they are also determined to destroy any proof or legal justification for the control of the aristocracy and clergy.

Before this revolution is over, I expect that millions of volumes will burn.

In their zeal, they have forgotten the power of understanding our past. What they destroy today may hold the answer to future questions.

My time in France is nearing an end. Now that England has broken diplomatic relations, it is inevitable the French will soon banish all British citizens who are not sympathetic to their new cause and government.

Though our political leaders have declared we will remain neutral, they understand the importance of current intelligence. I will stay until I can no longer fulfill my charge.

Along with my government work, in what time I have, I will try to save as much of their history as I can.

I have found others who share my interest. We have banded together to save as many historical documents as we can from the widespread destruction. Surprisingly, my most valued ally is an aged French priest, Father AntoineDubois. Most of Father Antoine’s brothers have been killed or forced to sign the Civil Constitution of the Clergy. Those who refuse to sign have fled, but he is determined to stay in hiding.

I met this good man last year when I stopped in Toulouse on my way to carry papers to Spain. I believe I wrote about that debacle.

When I offered to help him escape, he told me, with a twinkle in his eye, “I already have one foot in the grave, mon fils. How can I go in peace to meet my Maker if I run away from the work to which He calls me.” He lifted a finger and nodded sagely. “What if I am sent here, like Esther, for just such a time as this?”

We smuggle what documents we can save and store them in a well-hidden cellar beneath his kitchen floor in his childhood home in the countryside near Carcassonne. It is a dangerous undertaking, but we must do what we can. As a fellow student of history, I’m sure you understand.

My friend, I thank you for your letters. Amidst the madness that is France right now, it is good to communicate with someone of sound judgement and clear insight.

I hope we can continue to correspond even through the coming changes. My courier remains in place and undetected by the French. I trust him more than the daily packet, so continue to address your letters in the same manner.

I have arranged for your letters to be forwarded to my next posting when that time comes. I will write to inform you when I know of my new situation.

Respectfully,

Lord Daniel Wycliffe

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From: Corinna –32 Portman Square –London

To: Lady Georgiana Seymour –Farindel Hall –Sandgate, Kent

November 8, 1792

Dear Georgie,

You’ve been dreaming of Remington Keep for ages. I’m impressed at your cleverness and courage to find a way in. I wish I could have been there to explore with you.

Your solution for posting my letters to Lord Wycliffe, however, was a little too clever for me. I didn’t feel confident enough for such an intricate ploy, nor brave enough to face Rupert’s ire at my repeated clumsiness.

Lacking any other ideas, I decided to do as you first suggested. I have cultivated the habit of taking a walk every morning, no matter the weather. Minna thinks I’m very eccentric, but she is happy to let me do her errands if I take my maid Mary with me.

After receiving Minna’s charges, I wait, skulking, in the dining room until Rupert’s secretary comes out of the study with my brother’s correspondence. I meet him, quite by chance, on my way to the door.

The first few days, I said, “Good morning, Mr. Fairly. I would be happy to drop Rupert’s correspondence at the post while I am out.”

He no longer waits for me to offer. Now he just smiles and holds out the stack of letters. I put Rupert’s letters in my reticule with mine, and the thing is done.

I also bring home the letters coming to us from the general post office, and I’m so glad I thought of it, for thus, I avoided some uncomfortable questions earlier today.

I saw your handwriting, and in my anticipation of reading your news, I didn’t look through the rest of the letters right away. I didn’t expect to receive a response from Lord Wycliffe for another week or more.

I stopped for a few moments to stuff the remainder of the post in my reticule when an impatient and very rude gentleman walked into me and made me drop all the letters on the ground at my feet. Then he looked down his nose as if I were the most simple-minded dunderpate in London.

I was so stunned I didn’t even try to defend myself. I see more outright disrespect in the city, perhaps because people assume they will never see the recipient of their bad manners again. I try not to let it affect me overmuch.

In this instance I was grateful to that boorish gentleman. When I stooped to collect the post, I saw the second letter, the one from Lord Wycliffe.

You were right to encourage me to overcome my fear and send a sample of my work thus far on the biography of the Empress Maria Theresa Walburga Amalia Christina. Lord Wycliffe was so accommodating as to read it immediately and reply to me.

I mean to my brother.

Oh, how I hate to deceive Lord Wycliffe. I have the greatest respect for him and his scholarship. I tell myself that other than Rupert’s name at the end of each letter, the words and thoughts are mine, but he doesn’t know that.

You have this before, so instead of repeating myself and protesting a remorse that is clearly not strong enough to stop my misdeeds, I’ll tell you what he said. He was quite positive about my topic and my writing style but encouraged me to do more research on the culture and politics of the time to add richness and meaning to the story of Maria Theresa’s life.

Of course, Lord Wycliffe is right. I’m excited to delve deeper into European history in the first half of the eighteenth century. To that end, I am pleased to tell you that Rupert now has a subscription to the Gentleman’s Magazine. He just doesn’t know it.

I also wrote a letter to Lord Peter V. Alstone and the Honorable Mr. Victor Thorne, the founders of the London Republic of Letters. I expressed my, I mean Rupert’ desire to join their society. I asked them to report the results of their deliberations via post.

How to gain access to their library, I do not yet know, but I will think of something. I must.

Now I will leave discussion of Lord Wycliffe’s letter. Although, when he talks about conditions in Paris, I am both fascinated and horrified. I’ll share more later.

Instead, since I’m here to participate in the season, I will report one good development this week. One of Minna’s school friend, Lady Ballantyne is in town to help a Miss Philippa Moreton make her come out. Minna is hosting a ball to introduce Miss Philippa, and we have been spending a good deal of time together planning that entertainment. I feel like an insipid giant next to Miss Philippa’s tiny, dark-haired beauty, but she has been very kind to me.

I would prefer if you were here, but I am so relieved to have a new friend close to my age who will be present at social events. I feel more able to face it all.

For example, last night we attended a supper party at Lord and Lady Windham’s. I was seated next to Lord Craven, one of the most puffed up and boring young men alive. But periodically I would meet the understanding in Philippa’s eyes, and I was able to laugh inwardly and endure.

There was one interesting gentleman in attendance who is friend to Lady Moreton and Philippa. Sir Julian recently returned from India, so while I smiled and nodded at Lord Craven, I trained my ears to eavesdrop on some of Sir Julian’s stories, so the evening was not a total waste of time.

I also met Lady Delia Markham, daughter of the Duke of Langford. She is making her come out this year as well. I liked her very much, even though her blond, blue-eyed beauty will render me invisible in company. But now I have the comfort of knowing that no matter where I go, I am bound to have some much-needed support.

I look forward to hearing about the school foraging day. It is only a guess, but I will not be surprised if you find a way to sneak into the manor again.

Affectionately yours,

Corinna

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From: Lord Rupert Capener (Corinna using her brother’s name) –32 Portman Square –London

To: Lord Daniel Wycliffe –35 Rue du Faubourg St. Honoré –Paris, France

November 8, 1792

Dear Lord Wycliffe,

Thank you for your letter of October 2nd. It arrived first at Sandgate and caught up to me in London yesterday.

I believe you are right about historical context for my biography. Your list of articles and books will be invaluable. I await response from the founders of the London Republic of Letters. In the interim, I have purchased a subscription for the Gentleman’s Magazine. My primary concern now is to find a source for back issues of the magazine where I hope to find articles about the historical events leading up to Maria Theresa’s birth in 1717 until her death in 1780.

Since we have begun corresponding, I have more closely followed events in Paris. Your recent news is disturbing. My concern grows each day.

As I read about the terrible state of the poor in France, I notice more often the poor in our own nation’s capital. I admit to a certain sympathy for the cause of the common people. After generations of abuses by the privileged classes, I understand their desire for change. But I question how a new and better government can be built on a foundation of such an excessive cruelty and widespread violence.

The debate over fair government has spread to England’s shores and in some instances has flared into violence here. Though not anything like you describe.

We are also seeing an increase in émigrés, both royalists and priests, those who refuse to take the oath of loyalty to the government and who escaped the recent massacres in Paris. I read that 1200 were not so fortunate and were killed.

Of course, you are more than aware of all these events as you are in the center of this maelstrom. I just mention it because of my concern for your safely, indeed the safety of all British subjects residing in France in these unsettled times. While I applaud your determination to save as many historical documents as possible, I beg you will take special care.

Your concerned friend,

Lord Rupert Capener

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From: Georgie –Farindel Hall — Sandgate, Kent

To: Lady Corinna Capener –32 Portman Square — London

November 12, 1792

Dear Corinna,

I have so much I need to say in response to your letter, but first I must tell you what happened yesterday.

Our first day of foraging was successful, but you were right. I did slip away and sneak into Remington Keep.

I never was so frightened in my life when I climbed the stairs to the second floor to look at the portraits, and I—

But wait, I should tell the story in order.

Many of our older children at the charity school obtained work in the harvest, so we had a smaller group of fifteen. We started early yesterday morning after the children finished their toast and tea. The vicar offered the use of his carriage and came along to help shepherd the children. I had my cart, and Mr. Caney drove down into the village to help us bring the children up to the keep.

The morning was cool while we harvested by the hedges. As the day warmed, we moved into the woods. For every berry or apple that went into a basket, two went into the children’s mouths, but we didn’t scold. It was a rare day of freedom, and we all felt the joy of fresh air and plentiful fruit and greens.

After a light breakfast, the teachers, the vicar, and Mister Caney led the children to the pond. Mr. Caney thoughtfully provided a few small skiffs so that the older children could pole out onto the water.

I made some poor excuse that I wanted to tend to the horses and slipped away.

Only the choleric butler and the ineffectual housekeeper would be in the keep. I was sure I could avoid them, so I made my way through the woods, keeping out of sight of the windows, and came finally to the side entrance.

It was blessedly unlocked, and not a soul was near. I was sorely tempted to open windows as I walked through the house, but I left everything as it was, even the dust on every surface I passed. I did consider for a full minute writing a little note to the housekeeper in the dust on a table in the back parlor. “Clean me. –Sincerely, Your Keep Ghost.” I resisted the temptation.

As I looked into every room, I made a list in my mind of the cleaning and polishing for my imaginary staff. And then I refurbished each room to my taste. It is a grand, historic pile, somber and solid, made of our own Kentish ragstone. I could see it in my mind restored to its former glory.

I explored to my heart’s content everywhere except the servants’ quarters and the kitchen and didn’t see a soul. That is until I decided to climb the stairs and walk down the gallery to view the family portraits.

I was strolling down the hall, moving from the oldest paintings to the more recent, causing no stir. I turned a corner and screamed when I collided with a monster of a man who was lurking there.

Before I took another breath, he pulled me against him, twisting me until my back was pressed to his front, and put his hand over my mouth.

Cora, I’ve never felt more frightened, but I couldn’t give up without a fight. I lifted my head and bit him. He swore on a breath but pushed harder against my face and pulled me into the shadows.

I couldn’t breathe. I kicked and struggled, but he held me firmly. His unyielding arm was as hard as iron under my ribs.

Just when I started to see stars, the pressure on my face let up a little. I gulped in the air and fought dizziness.

He whispered, “Unless you want Mr. Willis to find us, you won’t scream again, ma petite.”

I stiffened then nodded, and he let me go.

You know better than anyone how I sometimes act before I think. He had frightened me so much, I turned and kicked his shin. It probably hurt my foot more than his leg, so I kicked him again and hit him on his arm for good measure. But I did it without making a sound.

In a second, his arm banded around me again, but this time I faced him. I gasped and leaned back as far as his grip would allow.

He took my chin and held it tight when I tried to turn away.

He hummed and breathed the words, “You’re dressed too à la mode to be une servante. I can only think of one other reason for you to be here.” He lifted my face to the meager light coming from a window at the end of the hall. “Well, one cannot question Sir Alfred’s taste in women.” Something in his eyes made me quiver, something I didn’t understand behind the derision and regret.

I was puzzling over it, so I was slow to understand his next words. “He’s quite a bit older than you, almost old enough to be your grandfather. If you hope he’ll be generous, I can tell you he won’t. The baron doesn’t take care of his legal responsibilities. He’s even less likely to compensate you for your time and . . . services.”

Cora! I have never been so insulted. He caught my wrist before my slap landed. “I wouldn’t, if I were you, little fox,” he said. “You won’t like what happens next.”

“I am not,” I could feel the heat rise on my face, “not Sir Alfred’s—” I couldn’t finish.

His hand loosened, and his thumb slid over my racing pulse. His voice deepened. “Non? That’s something, anyway. So, who are you, ma belle?”

I’m sure I looked like a landed fish. How was I supposed to respond to such a forward man? I’d already tried and failed to slap him, and I refused to faint.

He smirked. “Are you come to the keep on a sunny afternoon to try your hand at a little burglary? What do you hope to find?”

My anger overpowered any lingering fear, and I hissed, “How dare you? It’s you who doesn’t belong here. In the keep or in England.” I stamped my foot. “Unhand me and leave immediately, and I won’t report you to the authorities.”

He did drop his hands then, but only because he was laughing so hard, he had to put his hand to his side. Even then, he made no more sound than a wheezing breath. For another minute, he shook with mirth. He leaned down and put his hands on his knees, still shaking.

I folded my arms and waited, tapping my toe and scowling, while this insufferable man finished.

Finally, he stood straight, and for the first time I really looked at him.

He wasn’t as large as I’d thought. Tall certainly, but lithe in build. And his face—Some Bible verses came to mind. Those lines in Ezekiel about “the seal of perfection, full of wisdom and perfect in beauty.” For this man had a dark and savage allure. His black hair was tied back with a leather strap. His eyes, almost as dark as his hair, sparkled with bright intelligence and a cheerful daring. His thin, almost austere face was a study of honed lines and interesting shadows. It took a moment for me to remember that Ezekiel had been talking about the devil.

Which, I assure you, is apt. While many would think he’s handsome, his behavior to me was abominable.

As I studied him, his eyes roamed over my face. A small smile softened his full lips. “I do not think you will report me. How would you explain your own trespass to the authorities.”

I had no quick answer, although I’ve thought of many since then. Why does it always work that way?

When I said nothing, he cocked his head and listened. “We have both stayed longer than is safe.” Then he took my arm. “Come Mademoiselle, I will escort you safely out of the keep.”

And he did just that. Silent and agile as a cat, he led me through the empty halls. Questions crowded my mind, but I could not speak.

We slipped out the same door I had entered. In the daylight, I turned to face him and saw that he was younger than I had thought. I would guess only a few years older than we are. His good looks were a little less sinister, but still arresting.

He stepped closer and whispered, “It was an unexpected pleasure to . . . bump into you.” He lifted one dark eyebrow before he bowed deeply, took my hand, and kissed my fingers. My breath caught, and he grinned. Then he turned and loped off into the woods. I did not dare to follow. I had already been gone from the children too long.

By the time I returned, our party had moved into the sun again, and the children were playing a rigorous game of blind man’s bluff.

I smiled and laughed with the others, but I couldn’t stop thinking about every one of the stranger’s words and looks.

Corinna, I think he must be one of the French émigrés that come in greater number every week. He spoke like a gentleman if you ignored his words and bold looks. If that is the case, he must have been stripped of everything when he left France. His trespass in the keep may have been a desperate search for money. Or maybe he is a French smuggler or spy. Either way, I will never see him again. And I don’t even know his name!

I will never have another adventure like that. He was—But that is enough of that. Anything else I say would be mere speculation, and useless besides.

Instead, I will respond to your letter. Sir Julian sounds interesting. Tell me more about him.

And don’t let me hear another word comparing your new friends’ looks to what you see as a lack in yours. You are exceedingly beautiful. I don’t care if Miss Philippa is dark and petite with doe-like eyes, and Lady Delia is the British blond ideal.

If I were a man, I would admire your large, expressive gray eyes, and your thick, annoyingly well-behaved chestnut hair, and what I wouldn’t give for your willowy, graceful form.

You must know that while men, as a group are stupid, as individuals they do occasionally use their heads for something other than holding up their hats. I am confident you will have your share of admirers if you only try something new.

Last year you worked so hard to obey every societal stricture. That didn’t work. This year you should try if you can have some fun and a little adventure. Even if you don’t make a splendid match, at least you will enjoy the season.

I am relieved to hear you received your Lord Wycliffe’s letter without being discovered. As to the contents of his missive, if you are pleased, I am pleased. He sounds a little stiff and boring to me, but I haven’t your bent for scholarship.

Mama calls, so I most go. More later.

As ever,

Georgie

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From: Corinna –32 Portman Square –London

To: Georgie — Fraindel Hall –Sandgate, Kent

November 15, 1792

Dear Georgie,

I can’t believe it. You were faced with a desperate looking stranger in a deserted hall of a lonely keep, and you kicked him and hit him? And then you stayed to bandy words with him. Why didn’t you run? I can’t decide if you’re courageous or foolhardy. Anything could have happened! You are lucky to be alive.

But I admit, my curiosity is provoked. Who is this man? It is frustrating to know that we may never find out, especially if he is, as you suggest, a smuggler or spy. If that is the truth, what was he doing in the keep? Like you, he must have known that the baron was away from home.

I am constantly amazed at the adventures that find you. We could write a novel like the ones we used to sneak out to read in the folly at Rosecrest. An innocent damsel runs into a deserted ruin to escape the importuning of a rich, but cruel suitor. There she meets a dark, mysterious French spy. Of course, he really is the son of a Duke, who has emigrated because he has been wrongly accused of murdering the prefect of his town.

In all seriousness, do you believe the man you met is dangerous? How could you find a way to report him without revealing your trespass?

I urge you to be careful. Next time you meet a suspicious character in a dark, deserted hall . . . run!

As to my news, nothing so dramatic has happened to me. Although, I did find a way to access the back issues of The Gentleman’s Magazine.

A few days ago, we spent the afternoon at Mr. Hatton’s house where Lady Moreton and Philippa are staying while in town. Lady Ballantyne who helps to chaperon Philippa—you remember I mentioned she is one of Minna’s school friends—had hired a dancing master so that we could brush up on the latest dances.

Afterwards, Lady Ballantyne invited us for tea in the parlor.  The conversation was lively, but it wasn’t long before Philippa and I moved to a corner to talk about Queen Charlotte’s ball. She is quite nervous about being presented. I could only commiserate. I’m sure I have never felt more awkward than I did last year. Part of it was knowing I was to be presented to the Queen, but most of my nerves came from the old-fashioned hooped dress and the required three feathers in my hair.

As we talked, I happened to look down at the desk near us and what did I see? Yes! The most recent issue of The Gentleman’s Magazine was right at my elbow. It felt providential.

I picked it up and turned my back to the room before I whispered, “Miss Philippa, does Mr. Hatton subscribe to this magazine?” I could not hide my excitement.

Philippa raised her brows but looked over my shoulder before she lowered her voice and answered. “He must. He has dozens of older issues in his study.”

I looked down at the cover. “I suppose I might be labeled unladylike, even a bluestocking, if I were to express interest in reading some of the articles in those back issues.”

Philippa cleared her throat. “I suppose if I told people that I recently read Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman, I might be labeled, as she has been, a ‘hyena in petticoats.’”

I looked behind me to check that we were still private. “I could claim the same label.”

She let out her breath in a chuckle and said, “I don’t believe society should place limits on a lady’s interests or belittle her intelligence.”

We grinned at each other in happy accord.

She said, “Most mornings before breakfast, Mr. Hatton rides for an hour. If I were to slip in while he was gone, I could borrow a few issues.”

I reached out and grasped her arm. “I have a list of articles I am especially anxious to read.”

She patted my hand. “Send me a copy of your list with a footman, and I will bring the magazines when I come to call on Friday.”

That easily it was done, and I have spent my days since Friday in frenzied reading and note taking. Lord Wycliffe was right. I can already see how this information will enrich my biography.

I still await an answer from the London Republic of Letters. I have decided to take Philippa into my confidence about my need to get into their library. Maybe she will have an idea about how I can gain access. I hope to have more to tell you about that when I next write.

When I read your request for more information about Sir Julian, I laughed until I cried. Even if he wasn’t so obviously enamored with Philippa’s mother, Lady Moreton, he is much too old for me. He must be only a few years shy of forty. Still, he is more interesting than Lord Craven, who has taken to following me around at every social event since that cursed supper party where we met. I have yet to hear him make a comment of any sense.

Sometimes I despair of ever meeting a man who will meet my brother’s standard of a worthy applicant to my hand, at least one who won’t bore me to tears and is more interested in me than in my dowry. That such a paragon exists and would look on me with favor seems nearly impossible.

I will close before I get maudlin. Truly, this season is so much better than last that I have no cause for complaint.

Yours,

Corinna

The First Line

of a Regency Romance Book

I care about every sentence I write, but I probably spend more time trying to refine that first sentence (and paragraph) of each regency romance than any other sentence. (Okay that first kiss takes quite a bit of time too).

I suppose there is nothing inherently wrong with beginning a romance with: “Lady Jane Martin looked out her window at the (choose the weather) and sighed (or laughed or scowled).” But I just can’t pull myself to do it. And so I agonize, write, rewrite, agonize some more until finally something clicks, and it feels right to me.

Even the first lines of my free bonus stories require hours and hours of mulling. Which means that so far, I’ve written fifteen historical romance first lines/first paragraphs. I thought it would be fun to line them all up and see what you think.

Let me say in my defense that I had an excellent reason for every lie I told or truth I withheld. But Sir Walter Scott is uncomfortably accurate. It was not long before I felt like a startled spider trying to catch and mend the sticky and tangled ends of a very twisted web. –The Secrets We Keep

The grooms and footmen, the chamber maids and scullery maids whispered and darted quick, frightened looks at me when they thought I couldn’t see. I knew what they said. Sometimes I even laughed at the more inventive stories. –One Stormy Day (Bonus story for Secrets)

I thought I would be able to practice courage in a few small things first, just to get in the way of it. Fate and my stepbrother Hugh had different ideas. We had only lived in Bexhill a few months when Hugh was shot dead by a smuggler, ironically in a peaceful wooded field situated between the shops on Hastings Road and St. Peter’s church, right in the center of town. Then everything changed, and there was no time to dabble in courage. I must spring right in, or perhaps I should say, be plunged in, whether I would or not. –The Lies We Tell

I will apologize later. If I must. But if I do nothing, Meggie will be old, maybe even twenty-five, before Mr. Gerow gathers courage to act or Meggie lets him know she cares. How do the English continue to populate this island? –One Artful Ruse (Bonus flash fiction story for Lies)

In France, one says, ‘dis-moi ce que tu manges, je te dirai ce que tu es.’ It means, ‘tell me what you eat, and I will tell you what you are.’ But after only a short time in England, I knew the British were not made of what they eat, oh no. They were made from the air they breathe. –The Masks We Wear

I hadn’t planned to come to the masquerade in costume, but Miss Sidonie’s enthusiasm overcame my objections. I sat in one of the chairs along the edge of the room with the other chaperones, fading into the background as usual. Except, this time I was dressed as Alexander the Great’s mother, the Greek princess Olympias. –Masquerader’s Dream (Bonus story for Masks)

Brothers! Sometimes mine was too ridiculous for words. –Smoke and Shadows

History is written by men, by the high born and rich, by the winners. My story is no different. You may have heard it, the legend of the Gypsy Witch, a dark haired, dark-eyed Romani enchantress. –The Gypsy Witch (Bonus gothic story for Smoke and Shadows)

I was not superstitious, but I jumped at the flash of lightning. I may have let out a yelp, just a small squeak really, at the crack of thunder that closely followed. –Veiled In Mist

The morning mist cleared as Mercy rode away from Bexhill and from her past. –The Road Home (Bonus story for Veiled)

Lady Evelyn Colbourne hid in the greenhouse for as long as she could. Aunt Cornelia was in a rage. The Marquess of Camden hadn’t arrived the day before as she had anticipated, which almost made Evie like him. Anyone who could get the better of her aunt had her respect. –Under a Honeyed Moon (Coming Soon)

Despite the insufferable expense, Lord Rupert Capener, Earl of Rosecrest was back in London after a ten-year absence. He had untangled the mess of near ruin his father had left for him. He had restored Rosecrest into a thriving, healthy estate that he could pass down to his son with pride. Now he just needed a son. And to manage that, he needed a wife. –Minna and the Miser (Free Prequel to the Rebel Hearts Series)

I sold the trunk. Two portmanteaus made of sturdy cloth were all I needed to hold everything we owned. There was room at the top of the second case for the bed linens I would pack on the morning we left. We could stay in our lodgings two more day, maybe a third if I talked to the landlord after he’d had enough brandy. Three days until my little Amelia and I would move again to a smaller, less expensive room in a slightly less respectable neighborhood. –An Honorable Man

Lady Windham’s nose was of moderate size and shape, but she could smell a secret or scandal from a mile away. –Lady Moreton’s Proposal (Bonus story for Honorable)

Dear Georgiana,

The days of adventure are over. Romance is dead. We were not waylaid by a highwayman on our way to London. –Dear Lord Wycliff (Coming Soon)

I’d love to see your first line, to the book you are or would like to write, or the first line to your life story.

My Current (Work In Progress) Regency Romance Novel

Dear Lord Wycliff–an epistolary romance novel

Most regency romances are set during the London season, which everyone assumes is in the spring.

It is true that by the 1820s that became the norm—A King’s or Queen’s speech in late January or early February convened the parliamentary session. This in turn brought all the noble families to London, and they usually stayed until early August.

But in the 1790s, when the Rebel Hearts Series is set, the King’s speech took place in very late in the fall, (in December in 1792), and the session drew to a close in late May or early June, (occasionally July).

In Dear Lord Wycliff, Book Two of the Rebel Hearts Series, Lady Corinna Capener comes at the beginning of November to prepare for the London season, a few weeks before the King’s speech in December.

I assure you, the timing is correct.

In Book One of Rebel Hearts, An Honorable Man, I barely allude to the reign of terror and the French Revolution. It figures more centrally in Book Two since our main male character, Lord Wycliff, is serving in the diplomatic service in Paris, at least until diplomatic relations are cut off and he must leave.

I am challenged more than I anticipated (but in the best possible way) in writing this epistolary novel. But I love this story of Corinna and Daniel. And of Georgiana and Olivier.

This is only an inspiration image I made in AI, not the final cover

Here is a little sneak peek. The first letter. (One thing you must know to begin this story is that is was very improper for a lady to write to a single, unrelated gentleman during regency times):

November 1, 1792 32 Portman Square London

Dear Georgie,

The days of adventure are over. Romance is dead. We were not waylaid by a highwayman on our way to London.

Instead, my brother arranged everything so that we traveled by easy stages and stopped each night at inns along the way. I wish I could have traveled to town as Rupert did, on the back of a horse. Instead, Jaminna and I rode in the carriage and took turns trying to entertain little Henry. Six-year-old boys should never be closed up in a carriage for four days on end. Neither should twenty-year-old ladies.

You know I cannot read while travelling in a carriage without becoming quite ill, so for four days I watched out the window and tried to think of games and stories engaging enough to while away the time. Lacking imagination, I borrowed some of yours.

But Georgie, there is one particularly lonely, atmospheric stretch of road between Highgate and Islington that sparked my imagination.

Picture this. Millions of stars shimmer above us. A low mist eddies over the road. I, the stupendously beautiful and spoiled Lady Corinna Anne Capener, wealthy beyond words, (it is my story after all), am making my way to take London by storm.

But what is this? Just as the full moon rises over the trees on the eastern horizon, a daring thief rides out of the woods, shoots into the air, and bellows, “stand and deliver.”

The carriage pulls to a shuddering stop. The horses buck and blow, mist rising from their backs. The carriage door opens, and a tall, dark man looms over us. His face is lean and chiseled—No wait, the lower portion of his face is hidden by a mask, and his eyes gleam from beneath the shadow of his hat.

I lift my chin and climb down into the terrifying night, bravely shielding my fellow travelers. Just like in the accounts of Claude Duval, that famous 17th century knight of the road, my gentleman highwayman bows over my hand and agrees to accept less plunder if I dance with him on the moonlit roadside.

I felt quite proud of this gripping beginning to my story. Both Henry and Minna were enthralled. Then Rupert rode up beside us to ask after our comfort. He reminded me of more prosaic probabilities, and I laughed. Even if we were stopped by a thief who was dressed in the latest fashion and acted in the most gentlemanly manner, you know my brother would not like to be relieved of fifty guineas and tied to a tree.

And with my luck our highwayman wouldn’t be a nobleman in disguise, forced by his evil, usurping uncle to make his living on the high toby, but only a garden variety crook, determined to take my pearl ring and necklace and the few pence I had in my reticule.

Worse, it is much more likely I would stare mutely, like a dullard, rather than banter and jest with my creation. I hate to disappoint you, but I am not made for adventure, except as it happens in books.

Despite the uncomfortable monotony (and lack of romantic highwaymen), we arrived in London yesterday and settled into Capener Court. Minna says she is eager to take me shopping to update my wardrobe for the coming season. Can you believe it? She is the most generous soul and exceedingly kind to me when any other lady would resent having to chaperon her husband’s younger sister for a second year.

Really, I don’t know how Rupert convinced her to marry him. Not that he isn’t a good brother, but you know how stuffy and conventional he can be. And we won’t even mention how miserly, not that Minna regards that for one moment. She seems to find it an amusing challenge.

I thank you for the note you slipped into my reticule. It was a delightful interlude on the long journey, although I am not concerned that you will languish as you predict. Before the month is out you will find something to entertain you, even in Folkestone. Exciting things always happen around you. To illustrate, I remind you of the infamous ‘mystery of the purloined handkerchief,’ and the questions surrounding ‘who put the toad in the Vicar’s soup bowl?’

I so wish you could have come with me to town this season as we planned. It is inconvenient in the extreme that your uncle chose this precise time to ride into a fence at Chester Racecourse and die. Even three months of mourning seems too long for a man you never knew.

I just read the last and realize how heartless I sound, but I am feeling selfish. If you were here, the season would be bearable. Instead, I am doomed to endure another string of parties and balls where I must pretend interest in men who have no interest in me beyond my portion, and whose conversation is limited to the weather, their horses and carriages, and the hunt. They would never discuss any interesting topics, with a ‘delicate lady.’

On that topic, I ask you, why is a woman who is as tall as many of the men she stands up with considered delicate?

That question is impossible to answer, so I will admit to the more selfish reason I wish you were here. Dearest Georgie, I don’t know how I am to continue my correspondence with Lord Wycliff if you are not here to smuggle my letters out to the post.

I have thought to beg one of the servants to help me, but they are loyal to Rupert and Minna. No sooner than I reveal my need to one of the maids, I fear she will expose me. I don’t like to think of what my brother will do if he ever discovers that I’ve been exchanging letters with an unrelated, unmarried gentleman, even if it is under the guise of his name.

I must stop, I know. I only await Lord Wycliff’s response to the abstract of my article on Maria Theresa, and then I will stop writing to him. I have already tempted fate far longer than is safe.

Pray for me. Or, upon second thought, don’t pray for me. The last time you prayed to be released from attending Lady Marianne’s birthday celebration, we had pouring rain for weeks.

My dearest friend, Minna is at my door. We are to go to Bond Street this morning to replace my torn pelisse. I hope my letter finds you well, and that you’ll write soon and report all the news. I know you well enough to believe you will have at least one exciting tale.

Ever your affectionate friend,

Corinna

***Of course, when Corinna says she is not made for adventure, you just know that she will not be able to avoid it!

Would you like to read the next letter, this one from Georgie? Sometimes I feel she is going to ‘steal the show’ she is so engaging.

Love Is the Key

I’ve made this my motto. Actually, the full quote by Oliver Wendell Holmes, Sr. is “Love is the master key that opens the gates of happiness, of hatred, of jealousy, and, most easily of all, the gate of fear.

I believe this. I just like to focus on happiness or the journey to happiness in love. I don’t mind taking my characters through the other difficulties on the way to love, but I believe that love ultimately brings happiness–and peace, tolerance, patience, joy, meaning. In all aspects of our lives, on a small scale with those around us and on a larger scale as we interact with the world, we are happier and better if we try to see people through the lens of love.

So, I write romance. Even if I wrote another genre, there would be romance, or at least a strong relationship aspect at the center. I mean, what’s the purpose of a story if there is no love?

And on this Christmas Eve, more than ever before, I remember that Love Is the Key to everything good.

Merry Christmas!

Regency Romance Letters

How I came to be writing an epistolary novel

One of my college professors once said she wanted to write romances because she thought it would be easy. She described her imagined process like this: write a list of common scenes on 3 x 5 cards, shuffle them, and write the scenes in that order.

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I don’t believe she was a lover of the romance genre. If I were taking her class now, I would argue her assumption of ease and her supposed “systematic” approach. My experience has been so very different and much more difficult than she imagined. (And I think more rewarding than what she described).

Some romance authors probably do write according to a formula. They have a structure, perhaps even a template that works for them. They may plan according to trope before they create character. (Example: I’ll write an enemies to lovers romance. So, who are my main characters? Why do they hate each other? What has to happen to bring them together? Answer those questions and create a story). They may even have a few situations that regularly happen in their books.

There are moments when such a system sounds a little tempting. It might make this writing process easier, but I cannot do it for a few important reasons. (Please understand. These reasons are only important to me, to my process, to my satisfaction and joy in writing. This is not a comment on how other writers plan and write).

This is what I’ve learned (and continue to learn) about my writing.

First, characters come first for me. I can’t start with plot. I don’t know what is going to happen until I know my character, and sometimes not even then. I am often surprised as I write. My characters take on a life of their own and almost always change the plot. This is not comfortable or easy, but it keeps me on my toes. And I love the ride!

Second, I can’t write “to trope.” It’s only after I’m a good way through the story that I might recognize a familiar theme or device. I’m editing my novel Under a Honeyed Moon. It has a little bit of a Cinderella beginning and is fundamentally a forced marriage story. (You know, the couple that is found in a socially compromising situation and must marry). I didn’t start out with these tropes. They developed after Evie looked out her window and started talking to her friend about his plans to run away with another girl.

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Third, even the structure of my novels are guided by the characters. Liza demanded to tell her own story, so first person, single point of view. Amelia and Sidonie followed suit. (Helen and Maris did too). But we had to see both Susan and Magnus in alternating points of view, and in third person. Patience required third person and to be the only point of view. Joie has such a strong voice–first person, present tense, flash fiction (less than 1000 words).

I was sure Minna’s story would be told simply in her POV in third person, except then Rupert wanted a little bit of time at the beginning of each chapter.

Now, I’m writing Corinna’s romance. She’s half in love with Lord Wycliff before the story even begins. But their whole relationship is based on a deception and an innocently meant impropriety. What will she do? I’m still finding out, along with her best friend because suddenly, I’m writing an epistolary novel.

No formula. No 3 x 5 cards. Not easy, but I love it! I love discovering and sharing these people and their love stories with you.

New Book Release Day

It’s live! A new Regency Romance Novel just for you.

I played with a little bit of a reverse Pygmalion story here. Lady Cecily must “refine” Mr. Hatton. If you like My Fair Lady, you’ll love this novel.

Mr. Hatton may not be considered a gentleman, but he has an honorable heart. I think he’s my favorite Main Male Character so far. (But I admit, I do fall in love with each as I’m writing).

This is the first novel in the brand new Rebel Hearts series. Even though I finished writing this love story last spring, I waited to bring it to you until I had written a prequel for the new series and a prequel for the Illusions series as well.

Then I spent some time writing bonus stories for each of my novels so far. Lots and lots of romance because who can have too much romance?

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Now, I am about 2/3 of the way through writing Rebel Hearts, Book Two! So far, it’s titled Dear Lord Wycliff. It looks like I may be able to release that one in February or March.

Happy reading, and happy holidays.

Halloween Historical Romances?

Have you read a scary romance? (I’m not talking dark romance, because I wouldn’t know where to start to do that. I write clean/sweet/closed door historical romances, after all). In the spirit of the season, can we include gothic romances as scary romance? I think we must.

Last year in October, I accepted a challenge and wrote a short romance story with moody, misty, otherworldly elements. I had the best time writing it. It’s titled The Gypsy Witch. It is available in the Free Romance Reads section of this site.

If you missed it last year, I hope you enjoy it now.

I’m late to the game, but I wanted to try again to capture the shivers and atmosphere of the season. I’ve been thinking for weeks and have met a block–until today when I was watching the solar eclipse.

Thoughts of watching the sky, and all those who have done so through the ages, led to thoughts of the Equinoxes and Solstices, and in this autumn season led to thoughts of Samhain (pronounces Sah-wn). And Halloween led to All Saints Day and All Souls Day.

Suddenly Joane, a very minor character in The Masks We Wear, needs to sneak out on the eve of Samhain to have an adventure.

I found a little inspiration image:

Now, I can’t wait to start writing. (Just a little break from my regular writing).

Watch in the next few days form my second annual autumn/harvest/halloween story.

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